A Petition to Protect Endangered Animals
A Petition to Protect
Endangered Animals |
Write a letter to your government
and call for the protection of endangered animals such as pandas and polar
bears. You should draw up
your petition, illustrate why
you want to protect endangered animals and give some suggestions on how to put your ideas into practice. |
To whom it may concern: As global warming continues ravaging our earth, its irreversible impacts also begin to hit home. Human beings are not the only victim that bears the brunt of this climate catastrophe. In fact, a growing
number of animals are either in danger / jeopardy
/ peril or on the verge of extinction. Since each species plays
a crucial role in our ecosystem, I
am petitioning
for the protection of the animals
which are
vulnerable / susceptible to climate change and human activity, both of which are the bane of the apocalyptic warnings. (= Given the crucial
role each species plays in our ecosystem, I am petitioning for the protection of the animals jeopardized by climate change and human activity, both of them being a recipe for the Apocalypse.) Of all the endangered animals, pandas and polar
bears are currently facing an imminent threat to life, so it is high
time that we should take precautions to protect them. For example, the authorities
concerned are advised to tighten up the rules prohibiting illegal logging / illegal deforestation from destroying the
habitats of pandas. Violators should be subject to heavy penalties or
ten-year incarceration if they flagrantly flout / defy / violate / breach the
law. In addition, the Department
of Environment could campaign for the
reduction of CO2 emissions to keep the sea ice and glaciers from melting in the
vicinity of the Arctic. Educational
institutes, on the other hand, should be accountable for raising
public awareness about the dire
consequences of the escalating temperatures and rising sea levels, which are
the two factors driving / pushing our Earth
closer to a critical climate threshold. If our
government, together with the public, does their part, polar bears might be
less likely to lose their home or drown in the ocean. Your decision will have a profound impact on the survival of human beings and animals. I
hope you can accept my humble suggestions and take immediate action to save as many endangered animals as possible. Kind regards, Aaron N. |
Overall, the language and structure of the letter are clear and coherent. The writer has used a range of vocabulary to convey their message and ideas effectively. There are a few minor issues with grammar and word choice, but they do not detract significantly from the overall quality of the letter.
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